MayleanCall's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[You sucked colors from my life]

powerful

I love your piece. I love the detail in the flower and the shading. Also, the ripples are well done. Lovely line width variation.

I see nothing I can critique. Kudos.

[An Encounter]

Star Star Star

Lovely. I like the idea and feel of the piece.
The expressions are also very good. And I agree, the cuts and coloring are well done.

As for critiques, makes sure you double check your anatomy. I know hands and the like can be hard to do and you are doing well so far. Just remember to practice

I like the hair and the tears in the wings.

Well done.

exninja123 responds:

thanks a lot! :D

[-Sci-Fa-]

<3

I love this! Its so awesome! Love love love. I can't even critique anything on it.
Of all the works I've seen this is truly a piece worth 10/10 and I don't give this out often.

I want more. :3

[--Kelly is unamused--]

WEll,...

Despite what other people may have said I think this is awesome. I love the detail you put into the fur. It is very nice. :3

I love the eyes but the face seems a bit out of shape for me. Are you going for a fox face or a human face? Either way I think it could use a more defined maw and neck.

Next, the breasts. Since she is wearing a bikini I would suggest having them higher up on the chest. If she wasn't wearing a top I would say the were fine but since they aren't I can't. X3 The fabric would hold them up.

For a sketch, this is awesome. I love it. I can't do very detailed fur and I love this. Please, give us more?

Good work.

[Danser -- to dance]

Woot!

Great anatomy! Well done. I like how you did the ribbons on the shoes as well. Very nice. Perhaps try putting her in a ballerina's outfit next time, to go with the shoes. :3

[Drifting away]

Nyah

Fantastic. I love the portrayal of movement in this one.
The hair is good and I love the boots! And I'm also proud of you for drawing the hand. Its the only way you will improve upon them (by drawing them over and over). Don't try to avoid drawing them or you won't improve. :3

I think the pose it very good. It has a feeling of "I don't want to move forward but the wind is pushing me".

Work on your anatomy a bit, and when I say this I am reffering to the foot comment made earlier. If it helps try drawing the line to show where the floor would be.

[Gypsy girl]

Ooooh, Aaaaaah

I like this one a lot~!

My only comments are that Fox ears are a lot large then the ones that you are drawing. They remind me of a cat. Very small and petite. I also agree with the comment about adding more detail in the drawing so that the skirt isn't the only detailed thing.

Nice work though~!

[Sickpants]

LOL

Ohkay, thats awesome. :3
Scary Spongebob for the win.